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dragonheart ([personal profile] dragonheart) wrote2011-05-16 03:54 pm
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NCISdrabble100: Challenge #239 Pain


Title: Pain

Author: Kytivafan

Word Count: 100

Rating: G

Character(s): Tony/Ziva

Spoilers:  8.23 Swan Song

Author's note:  My (100 word) attempt at Tony’s thoughts in the elevator as I was confused as to why his face reflected irritation, then bewilderment and finally love when confronted with a tearful Ziva.

 

 

 

Why does she do this to me?  I was in the process of making myself believe that I could live without her.  I have worked hard these long weeks to try to fit a square peg into a round hole, and I was making progress – it wasn’t pretty but it was working.  Substituting her was painful, but necessary.

And now she needs me – she needs me – never before has she needed me, never has she let me this far in, never has she let me see.  How can I deny her when I love her?  All but her is forgotten

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[personal profile] alidiabin 2011-05-17 06:14 am (UTC)(link)
Good little ficlet very good insight to Tony's emotion in that scene. Well done.

[identity profile] libbipage.livejournal.com 2011-05-17 03:45 pm (UTC)(link)
I would love for those to be his thoughts at that moment, you certainly followed his emotions well in that scene! Great job!